55 Fiction: The Last Minute

 55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. Read more about fiction-55.
Calmly, he thought as he paced around the room 'Can the prophecy be true? Will I die in next 30 secs?'

The clock on the wall struck twelve.

'I am saved,' he jumped around excited and he felt sharp pain in chest.

The town hall struck twelve and his heart gave the last stroke.
This 55 fiction is based on a true story, the man's autopsy revealed heart stroke due to over excitement.

16 comments

  1. Sid!!
    awesome..
    no words indeed!!!lovely....
    we bth match...2 55fiction each!!
    keep smiling

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  2. @Shruti
    yeah...now i am really bitten by the fiction 55 bug...:D

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  3. Good one!!
    But the first one scores over this!! :)

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  4. @Shilpa
    Oh yeah had written 113 words before..had to edit it to make it fit...:D

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  5. hey pal. doing good work. keep it up.

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  6. You too have been bitten by the 55 fiction bug...!

    But nicely done, I must say.

    P.S. Why do they always have to have a sad ending... ???

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  7. ohh so u r doing 55-ers too.. this was a good one.. nice twist in the tale..

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  8. @Rane
    Kya hua??? Y OMG??? is that for the story or for the post???

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  9. @Roshmi
    Hey, u see sad and tragic endings tend to get great surprise and shock while reading...however I am thinking of a plot to write a humourous fiction 55 too sooon...:D

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  10. @Aparna
    Thanks...that twist was created by God...cos this is based on a true story...:D

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  11. Great one buddy....

    Cheers and improving all the time

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  12. ohh boy.. is it real?!! that's really sad!

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  13. @Pundit
    Thanks buddy...your comments made me improve :D

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  14. @Ashwini
    Yeah it is really real....the man's house clock was 1 minute ahead of the main clock.

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