Fiction 55: The test result


Fiction 55 is a short fiction of 55 and less words. Its been a while, I wrote any…so coming up with one.

He waited patiently for her to come out, she was talking the pregnancy test inside. She came out weeping.

‘Don’t worry sweetheart, its going to be ok, we are going to raise a nice kid,’ he said.

‘Oh darling, you are so sweet, I really wish you are the father!!!

Note: The above fiction 55 should be considered a crude humor and not a social-political-regional-expression.

17 comments

  1. Oh siddhu!!
    Migh migh!
    That was really a very good one!!

    Keep Going!

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  2. rofl =))

    That must be the biggest shock for that guy :P

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  3. :P .... Thank God you put the disclaimer :-o

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  4. Ha...Ha...Ha.. Nice one. But where is Sid the Kid? I miss him!!

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  5. Lol!!!!!....This 55 words is surely an intersting concept....

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  6. @Shruti
    Thanks...ur score is more than mine!!!

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  7. @Pra
    hey hi buddy...Sid the kid is waiting to come out...i have him drafted...he comes somewhere in the second half of the month!!! :D

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  8. @Adesh
    Now I suppose u r bitten by the bug!!!

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  9. excellent.....
    sid rockks..I found the feeling behind this piece quite impressing..u are also great in this 55 genre..

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  10. hey thanks rahul...yesterday i was hunting for this comment...obviously it was nice so i tot i rejected it...:D

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  11. Hahaha =)) cant stop laughing.. that was tooo humorous..

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  12. Another good one with a twist!

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