Funny Friday Fiction 55: At the doctors


Fiction-55 is a story told in 55 words or less. Choose a setting, choose the characters and write the story in 55 words or less. 




"Now, comes the hard part," the doctor said, "Close your eyes slowly, take a deep breath." 

'God, let this difficult situation pass away,' she prayed silently. 

"Now, slowly open your eyes," the doctor said, "Very slowly let them adjust to the surroundings." 

The doctor took a deep breath, "See your medical bill." 


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There is a funny story to tell in everything. 
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18 comments

  1. hey i wrote somewhat similar...only being the tooth :D ... good one Sid

    HaRy

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  2. @Hary
    Wow... creativity has no limits...:D
    cool..

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  3. He he he... once again... you are really funny =))

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  4. @Deepika
    :D now its going 2 b funny funny funny all along...:D

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  5. =))

    bill? ...lol
    good one..!!

    :)

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  6. Hehe...yaar waise this bill part is really always the toughest part:D

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  7. @Ekam
    This is the based on a true story...:P ;)

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  8. Got it Bang On!!! Nowadays Medical Bills do need this kind of preparation.... :))

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  9. @Dmanji
    He he he... true story...:D

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  10. hehe at least the doctor was considerate in helping the man relax before showing him the bill ;)

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  11. medical bill :D .... some of these can send a person back to the ICU :P

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