"Whatcha doing?" I asked her as she stood in a questionable position in the jogger's park, early morning. How early? Even the slum dwellers had not come out on the streets for their morning potty. 'I am practising a new form of defence,' she replied peacefully. 'Defense, that is interesting. Some trouble?' I quizzed. 'I met my old friends today over lunch then we went shopping, and in the evening we took coffee at CCD,' she started. 'So we were discussing relationships, she was telling how she has screwed her life and how practical she has become after her first breakup I haven't told anyone about my boyfriend, but it made me think of how foolish and stupid I am...' About time, don't you think? '..and how I am not doing anything about it, also they told me that I have lost a lot of weight, which is sad because people keep asking if I am sick or something...' Uh oh, is there an emergency exit around?
and now he's being cruel, just like everyone else in the world. oh well :D
ReplyDeletegood one :)
Who is he?some kind of terrorist?
ReplyDeleteAnd is this 55-fiction?
I don't get the funny part. :(
haha nice twist.. bt it cn hav two meanings - even he died along with evryone or he was so brilliant (bt no one recognised him) tht he found another planet or satellite with life nd moves to it.. so tell me wat was ur intention - just nuclear technology or space technology too :p
ReplyDeleteintriguing and quite interpretative...
ReplyDeleteout of the box thinking.
liked it.....
Planet earth can't be blamed for everything :)
ReplyDeleteohh, why so angry. chill down buddy.
ReplyDeleteIf was smart, he wouldn't do anything to kill himself, probably Vipul's idea would have made him a genius ;)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing!!
The world is really cruel to you at times..but does that mean you have to be more cruel if you have the power...
ReplyDeleteOoooh! Blew-up the earth to pieces!!! A different piece from Sid :D...why?
ReplyDelete"He pressed the remote control detonator and boom, planet earth was shattered to pieces."
ReplyDeleteMust be the "brahmastra"... what?
It was interesting.It could have been longer.
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oh shit.. its just 2010... he could atleast wait till 2012... people would atleast believe what could(might/would) happen in 2012..
ReplyDeleteHaha..that was a good one. I initially thought this was a depressing post or something looking at the way it started. Liked the way it ended :)
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