This is my first attempt for writing a love story, which I am really bad at. Mani Padma (from Ginger Chai ) challenged me to write a love story a few days ago, it is not a real great read, but a little feeble attempt to take a taste in this genre. Please give your honest opinion… Cheers, Sid. *fingers crossed* Breathe in. Breathe out. Damm, this is so easy when you are not tensed. Why is this clerk talking so much time. ‘Will you hurry up?’ I asked the clerk. My finger nails were tapping the counter in excitement. My name is Shailaja, 30, single and employed, in short a perfect girl for the aunties, mammies to constantly remind me that my days are waning out, that I have to find someone before it is impossible for them to. It is not that I don’t want to get married, but I should get some proper match, isn’t it? All they show me is either short, tall, long nose, meaning some imperfection in some way or the other. I am not at all hopeless romantic and I am definitely not goin
and now he's being cruel, just like everyone else in the world. oh well :D
ReplyDeletegood one :)
Who is he?some kind of terrorist?
ReplyDeleteAnd is this 55-fiction?
I don't get the funny part. :(
haha nice twist.. bt it cn hav two meanings - even he died along with evryone or he was so brilliant (bt no one recognised him) tht he found another planet or satellite with life nd moves to it.. so tell me wat was ur intention - just nuclear technology or space technology too :p
ReplyDeleteintriguing and quite interpretative...
ReplyDeleteout of the box thinking.
liked it.....
Planet earth can't be blamed for everything :)
ReplyDeleteohh, why so angry. chill down buddy.
ReplyDeleteIf was smart, he wouldn't do anything to kill himself, probably Vipul's idea would have made him a genius ;)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing!!
The world is really cruel to you at times..but does that mean you have to be more cruel if you have the power...
ReplyDeleteOoooh! Blew-up the earth to pieces!!! A different piece from Sid :D...why?
ReplyDelete"He pressed the remote control detonator and boom, planet earth was shattered to pieces."
ReplyDeleteMust be the "brahmastra"... what?
It was interesting.It could have been longer.
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oh shit.. its just 2010... he could atleast wait till 2012... people would atleast believe what could(might/would) happen in 2012..
ReplyDeleteHaha..that was a good one. I initially thought this was a depressing post or something looking at the way it started. Liked the way it ended :)
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